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Dripping,
Standing alone
Looking out
Under a grey sky
Over the grey ocean
Water above and below.
Wet grey rock
Encloses a space
Of grey sand
Dark behind the mouth
Of the cave,
A split in the cliff
Going black into the hill.
There is water within
Lying grey near the back,
White shells in a bed
Near the front,
Where the grey sea
Encroaches with white-foamed waves
On the rocky shore.
Water drips from the roof.
The black line of the cliffs
Smudges on the white map.
Imagine you've just run several hundred metres along a rocky beach as the rain pours down, beginning to soak through your jacket. You know there is a large cave around the corner. You get to it. Standing in the mostly dry cave, you look back out at the rain, and realise you may be here for a while. Hopefully not till the tide comes back in.
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Ithildae's avatar
I adore the photo. Hmm... I think some of your poems could be rendered as short stories - they read like prose. Yess.

(Sorry, it's late at night. Not much sense-making here)